
Bargains & Temptations in Story
The oldest plot in the book: the offer, the price, the signature. Eight bargain stories from the tradition, and the house rules.
Theophilus of Adana
The template for them all: a 6th-century cleric (in the legend) who signs a pact with the devil for advancement, repents, and is freed when the Virgin Mary retrieves the contract. The first great “signed in blood, reclaimed by grace” story — the form every later version follows.
Faust — Marlowe
In Marlowe’s Doctor Faustus (c. 1590s; printed 1604), the scholar signs away his soul for twenty-four years of power and knowledge, attended by Mephistopheles — the devil’s negotiator, weary and witty. The final hour is English drama’s most famous countdown. Source: Marlowe, Doctor Faustus, V.ii.
Faust — Goethe
Goethe’s Faust (Part One, 1808) retells the legend as a cosmic wager: Mephistopheles bets he can corrupt Faust; Faust bets no moment will ever satisfy him enough to say “linger a while.” The bargain becomes philosophy — and the devil, the most charming figure on stage.
The crossroads
The folk form: meet the devil at midnight where two roads cross; trade your soul for skill, luck, or wealth. Musicians’ legends (the Robert Johnson story), gamblers’ tales, and countless ballads. Terms always stated plainly; travelers always certain they understood. See The Folk Devil.
“The Devil and Daniel Webster”
Stephen Vincent Benét’s 1936 story: New Hampshire farmer Jabez Stone’s soul, defended in court by the great orator Daniel Webster against the devil himself — who is out-argued, out-maneuvered, and sent home empty-handed. The bargain story as American tall tale and courtroom drama.
“The Devil and Tom Walker”
Washington Irving’s 1824 story: a miser meets the devil (as a lumberman in a swamp) and haggles at length over the terms — the rare bargain tale where the haggling is the entertainment, and the devil keeps the books.
The violinist’s dream
Giuseppe Tartini’s 18th-century account: the devil appeared in a dream and played a sonata of impossible beauty on the violin; Tartini woke and wrote down what he could remember — the “Devil’s Trill” Sonata. The bargain where the devil pays first.
Paganini’s rumor
Niccolò Paganini’s superhuman violin technique spawned lifetime rumors of a pact — which the violinist neither confirmed nor discouraged, understanding that the legend was good for ticket sales. The character cites this as “the only honest marketing in music history.”
The house rules
In the character’s fiction, every bargain follows five rules — stated to every visitor before the quill is offered:
- The terms are stated plainly. No tricks in the wording; tricks are for amateurs.
- Read it twice. The character insists. A rushed signature is unaesthetic.
- A bargain kept is a bargain honored. The Pit’s word is better than most heavens’.
- The price is always what you offered. The character never names the price first.
- The door stays open. Appeals are heard; renegotiation is possible; the terms for that are also stated plainly.
The horror, the character maintains, was never in the fine print. It was always in the signature.
Source notes
- Summaries are of: the Theophilus legend (medieval); Marlowe, Doctor Faustus (c. 1590s/1604); Goethe, Faust I (1808); American and European crossroads folklore; Benét, “The Devil and Daniel Webster” (1936); Irving, “The Devil and Tom Walker” (1824); Tartini’s dream account (18th c.); Paganini pact rumors (19th c.).
- The five house rules are invented for the Vizlings “Satan” character (2026-09-27).
- Persona lines on bargaining: Lines & Persona Voice. The signing staged: Signature Scenes.